You really like that flute or siren sounding sound, you do bring some "UNIQUE" sounds to the table making it ll work, but again I would love to hear a much longer version maybe like a song or something.
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Something longer would be great.
My ears are bleeding a little.
I hate it when things like this play in NGAP. Especially when I'm trying to sleep.
Try easing off the sudden frequency changes. It's funny that the backround sound in it was actually pretty good, you should've just left it like that.
Well, it starts of good, but then it doesn't go on that greatly. Lots of variation indeed, but "screeching" part of it is pretty crappy. Keep te work up though!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.