It was good
I liked this, though it is probably one of the lesser things you have made. I guess it was just pretty different than your original style, so this will take getting used to. What works well is that it definitley gets better the more it goes on. When I listen to this song, I visualize something like a dirty industrial place which is exactly what you were aiming for. I think I can also hear some trace influences of punk rock. It does a pretty good job of experimenting with itself, especially with the styles at the end.