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{DJ-L} Patterns

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I got the chords.


My apologies but this...aw god damn.
Here https://www.ableton.com/en/blog/making-music-book-of-creative-strategies/
Learn, improve and come back then again. I don't want to tear new musicians down.

0.5/5 Stars
Go fourth and learn, young one! \(°_°)/

LavaRift responds:

Although this is far in my past, I appreciate the feedback.

It's interesting, I'll give you that. The drums really aren't doing anything for the mix though, as quiet as they are. I've got to say, I really don't like the electric piano. It just just sounds cliche.

I wouldn't classify this dubstep at all. There's no drop, just some computer noises. I suggest studying your genres more.

LavaRift responds:

Thank you for the feedback.

Apologies in advance for the low rating, but...

This song is really not good at all.

The intro (if you can even call it an intro) was just the same repetitive, empty and off-key notes over and over. It just sounds so weak and empty.

The addition of the drums didn't help either. They were so quiet and weak that they did barely anything to salvage the already-terrible-and-boring intro.

The entire song feels like it's just those quiet drums and that boring piano.

At 2:12, that "drop" didn't really sound like music at all. It sounded like a god-damn computer making beeping noises.

And finally, some halfway decent drums at the end. Too bad you only used them for 5 seconds.

My advice to you is to try making better melodies, making those drums really pop, and just learning more about production before jumping headlong into making music.

Sorry, it just isn't good.

LavaRift responds:

Thank you for feedback.

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0.98 / 5.00

Mar 25, 2016
10:33 AM EDT
File Info
4.2 MB
3 min 2 sec

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