I have to agree...
The quality it terrible (definitly when it gets to the really loud bits.) other than that, it's pretty good.
sounds good... just need compression
I loved that track. It sounded great, but it just didn't sound too great. (If that makes any sense) Try running a compressor, or some sort of filter to take the noise down a notch, and it would be incredible. That would fix it I think. There is a lot of potential there.
This would be really good, only if this were mastered a little better and wasn't so loud. It shows great potential, but this version is of poor quality. I'll talk to you more about this on AIM.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.