Nice...

I think I can hear Vanguard in there. Great work! I still need lessons... Lol. And please, don't use that guitar ANYMORE. Thanks.

"pretty good"

beggining good, percussion kicks in ruins the whole experience. guitar comes in later in the song recovers some of the interest of the song. i didn't really like it it was ok and sounded pretty good. you need to work on stronger beats, percussion, and also a flowing melody in order to be succesful in this song. hope the advice help...P.S. listen through your songs, find your mistakes, make solutions to the mistakes, use the solutions to create a song that fits in with the audio portal, then be succesful. never put all your eggs in one basket, take each step at a time don't risk anything.

I would have givin you a 10...

if it wasnt for the misuse of the Slayer... That specific guitar aint supposed to go up that high, thats why its cheesy... any way, i liked it mostly, so im rating 5/5 9/10

Wow!

I'd like to say that all I did was add like, one or two FX, the composition is all ChiRoN's : D

-It's great, only think is the FL Slayer, it's cheesy, but then again, I think that it adds to the happiness of the song, so hats off to yah mate : D

-Great production man!!!

-ImperfectDisciple-

Nice.

Sounds like video game music lol.
A very nice melody, happy and light.
Overall a good song, if you wanted to change anything about it, you might add some extra things in to build it up a bit more, like layers of soft synths or something in the middle, if you wanted to make it more climatic, but as it is, it's perfect as just an easy-listening tune.

Check out my music too,
Smad.