I really like the melodies used and the transitions are quite good, but either it is too quiet at the beginning or to loud at 0:56 and 1:26. I think all your track really needs is some mixing. Also just a preference but at 0:44 the instrument seems a bit dry. Either way great work, keep it up! =D
First off, woah! I've never heard a sting piece like this pulled off so nicely! Whenever I try to make them they blow up in my face :P. I liked the melody, except it took me a little bit to latch onto it at the very beginning. Another minor tweak is for some of those notes that just dont come out right away, just move it like a 32nd or 64th before where you want it too, so it will sound like it comes in right on time! Its what I to at least. Overall it was a nice piece and I'd definitely listen again!
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