I think... You need a different kick for this one. As much as I like it, you've used it quite a bit now and I don't feel that it fits here, it's a bit too overpowering for something with this much melodic play going on.
It's drowning out your layers.
The vocals from 1:40 to 2:10 seem like they're dragging a bit, I don't know if you can clean that up and make them sharper to the beats of the music but they definitely sound lax.
It might be nice to have some contrast between the section at 1:15 and 2:55 besides the added main melody. Give the main part a bigger bang.
Sounds like a plan, will have fun making a new kick. Hahah, needs one with less distortion and more bass then layers. I will see what I can do. Thanks for the review! :)
I like what you got so far, it all flows well and sounds good. Pan out those rough spots and i think your doing pretty good.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.