It's not great. Seems as if you just used pre-made loop samples (which at least sounded nice by themselves if that's the case). First transistion at 00:41 sounded bad. The first part just suddenly cut off and then the other lead synth came in without any context, sounds as if a whole other song has started playing. Transistion at 01:13 was also pretty bad, except that both parts kinda match. Assuming that both melodies are played in the same scale and that's the whole reason it fits. Same thing with the transistion at 01:25. On 01:41 it returned to the same intro pluck melody thing, which doesn't fit completely. Another transistion at 1:58, copletely out of place. You know what, I'm done talking about those transistions and segments.
In conclusion, I just have a very strong feeling that all those melodies and all this sound design are just pre-made sampled loops. Even the drums. They do sound nice by themselves, but still, they're unoriginal loops. And when you put them all like this in 1 "song", it's pretty bad.
If you actually knew scales, chords and all that other theory crap, there's just NO WAY that you would make this thing.
Those are basically my thoughts. Yeah.
HAHA, did use pre-made loops! might edit it though.
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