not as good as your other stuff but still good
i know im copying off what the voting icon says but this song is cool.
Another one to say "Nice!" and some other comments
Now here's a list of things to fix, IMHO, to make this better:
- I think the guitar has too much distortion; increase the treble and reduce the bass
- Vocals need some polishing; I don't find anything wrong with the vocal style, but it needs refining
IF it sounds perfect, it's quite radio-friendly.
The lyrical content is good but practice more on the vocals = )
Great excpt for the vocals
Vocals are the only thing holding you back on this song. I'm not trying to be abusive here but your vocals are really horrible. you need a new person to sing because the rest is very good.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.