i like it. the concept is solid. could definitely use more bass during the chorus. you could make your snares louder too. its pretty dope otherwise
This is probably missing a few elements but pretty solid and headed in the right direction. Love that small transition though.
I was excited as that intro started and then the beat dropped... it just sounds some what off... and the piano feels like it needs some more or less to it, its on key but it just doesn't seem to hit the right way.
You got some talent here though man, tweaks here and there, try to envision exactly how you want it to sound in your head and replicate that into the project.
Its a very nice loop. I have a cavern or a dungeon of an adventuregame in mind when listening to it.
Because it is very repetetive i would think about something to make it more special.
Drums- Hi-Hats are very rare. To add a little more drums or variety i would check out warbeats drum tutorials on Youtube- especially the ones on dynamic and natural sounding drums. And give a little credit to him^^ or just start your metronome and try your Drumkits within your Song to get a feel for the rhythm.
Piano: The piano sounds like it doesnt want to end the loop. I would double the pattern and vary the notes, if you're working in FL Studio, to make the loop sound more complete.
Good Transitions, VSTs, nice feeling- very good for a novice;)
sorry for the late answer- mainboardfailure^^
nice day and best regards
WIth a better drumline this would have banged....good luck in the future.