I am no music expert. :) But I like the music. Maybe you can improve by adding piano sound?
Oh, this piece was meant to pay tribute to the syntnwave movement of the 80s which is all electronic generated music, neon lights, virtual reality, tron, distorted basses, futuristic synths, check it out, wonderfull genre of music.
I like the 80s, so I like this song, oh yeah
Thanks a lot! My dear guy :3