You're definitely good at writing, and the chip percussion is interesting, but your crashes are suffering. Could use a lot more reverb (and maybe delay) on those. The high end of this track is very stunted, maybe because of the chippy style. I'll chop this review into sections.
Bass is good, but it's quiet on everything but headphones. You also have some of your frequencies bleeding into each other. I'm not sure how to work with the synth you've got going on, but you may want to check out some trap 808 samples and try to get in the ballpark of that sound. Trap emphasizes a lot of frequencies and overtones to achieve loudness factor.
I can pick out the synths on your leads. Try using velocity more to accent your notes. Those arpeggios are good note-wise, but they sound a little off. Maybe more reverb. It feels like they are just laying there melodically.
2:30 ish crashes sounded nice, again, could use reverb. The percussion seems to be staying almost the same the whole way through.
Try writing your hi-hats 16 bars at a time, varying the rhythm. This is key to trap.
Good track. I enjoyed it. Just could use some tweaks is all! You're getting better every time I hear your work. :)
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