=== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review ===
Sup, Kyle? The start of this song is really cool, with the arpeggio that is not quite an arpeggio but also not quite a melody. The chords that follow afterward, though, are a bit questionable, and then suddenly at :45 or so you transition abruptly into another part, and then ANOTHER part at 1:04. If this song suffers from anything, it's that it lacks structure. Instead of sounding like a cohesive song, it sounds like a lot of separate ideas. I really liked the arpeggiated idea at the beginning - you should try to expand on that! I also really like the change of pace at 2:07 - I feel like that is one transition which is effective.
Mini-scores (See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
Overall (this is not an average): 6.5/10
Hey, thanks for your review and the links to your tips and trips on how to improve!! I shall definitely read them(already read one of the mixing ones) and try to apply them to my tracks.
i really like this a lot. it has the crazy randomness that your music often has but it just flows really well. if i were you id use this song s a staple to follow for future songs.