yo man, it sounds pretty nice but it's too short, hope you make a larger version and when you do it let me know k? peace out brother
Needs more to it
You have an interesting mix here. The timing and variety of samples is astoundingly good, however, add more instrument lines, perhaps a bassline and some techno synths. Don't let these game sfx samples drive the piece; let them complement it. I would use this current piece as a foundation and build a song on top of it.
Keep in mind that it's only a demo.