The mixing could be much better; for example, the sweeps are kind of too loud... also you use way too many of them. The ending just sounds like it was cut off too.
The actual melodies and stuff are decent; just don't spend too much time on individual tracks...
Make more projects rather than "perfecting" one because that is the only way you get experience. I usually write more; however, lately the profiles I happen to review on don't actually see the review.
Good luck and keep it up :)
Thanks for the advice! Ill make a new song instead of perfecting this one and i should've lowered the volume of the sweeps and i didn't know how to end it off because this was my first song so i was kind of experimenting on it but anyways thanks for the advice, it means alot to me.
It's not a bad start. I would say some of the undertones of the song become a bit convoluted. I way say ease up on the supporting beats, and perhaps add a softer snare. Even adding a nice piano would be great.
Thanks for your opinion ill be sure to take your advice :)
This was awesome to listen to. I love how its shapeless genre-wise (to me at least..)
only..whats with that sudden end
Thanks Yardood! Im glad you liked it and i was having some trouble thinking of a way to end it so i think i may have messed up there.
I like it! I can feel all the layers you used here, and I can tell why your friend told you to post it here, it is very video-game like, love the plucked main melody, reminds me of tekken 5's ice level, but yours is much more tropical.
Im glad you liked it! My friend makes geometry dash levels and i asked him to listen to this song and i guess he liked it and maybe wanted to create a level using this song but i did try to make it a bit tropical but it went too tropical but i think it worked. :)