I thought it was great, video game or trailer theme is great
Really liked it. I'd vote to add some snare rolls, timpani hits, cymbal crashes, and harp sweeps as well. Sounds like a great song for a video game.
Thanks! I do have a timpani part written in, but no matter how loud I set it to, it's inaudible; and there are some snare rolls, especially in the repeated chorus phrase. I'll work on mixing those and some crashes in.
EDIT: I mixed a timpani-boosted version with crashes here: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/668216
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.