This song overall seems pretty generic, meaning it doesn't really have its own unique style to it. The production and technical aspects to it are okay. Everything I think about this song is basically said in that really long review a couple ones down.
Okay, one thing that seriously triggers me - "melodic edm" "hard edm" edm it literally all electronic music, not just mainstream electro somewhere around 128-130 bpm. edm could be dnb, dubstep, ambient, glitch hop, trap, future bass, literally anything.
I call it EDM because that's what it is.
welp this is just the best thing for valentine day just kinda erm it like u telling somebody to show u their love to something anyway this is good u know lyrics are got and the melodies are also good im getting better at this stuff to a little bit :) so gg m8 4 half star
I love how it sounds, I should use this during a valentines dance:)
- Sorry in advance if this sounds really negative - the mixing, melodies, and whatnot are perfectly fine, so you get a perfect 5 in that regard. -
A couple thoughts:
- The instrumentation isn't that interesting for a lot of the song.
- Autotune... it's fine to have a little, but it sounds a little inhuman.
- The lyrics are really repetitive near the end.
That said, the lyrics are good, and the melody you've used is good as well. There's nothing musically wrong, but I simply didn't get into it that much.
What I've decided recently is that lyrics often detract from the quality of the song, as they put the focus more on them and take it away from the instrumentation (both while the song is in production and being listened to). Your instrumentation is disinteresting until around 1:09, which is somewhat understandable as the song is building up, but I want something more from you (which I know you're capable of).
What makes some songs so incredible is that the words (if present) don't necessarily matter - the simple music is enough to make you feel a certain way. I didn't really feel that much love from this piece, and I feel like if you're making a song asking someone to show you their love, they should feel compelled to do so.
In short, it's a well-made song, but isn't really interesting enough to make me really feel the love, and that's where the extra star is.
This is my favorite review I have ever gotten, thank you. If I tackled art in a similar directive, I'd probably be unstoppable. Thanks for inspiring me to do better.
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