I don't know how else to say this but a lot of the 'noises' in the song were simply annoying.
The drums were well done but didn't sound that good. By this I mean it had an interesting beat, but I didn't like the choice of samples used. I'd say download some more drum samples if you can and mix up the instrumetation. Also, things like reverb, echo, chorus, flanger and distortion would add a lot more flavor. Yeah, and don't overdue the "Oh" like that.
You said it yourself, it sounds a little empty.
Here a little rule of thumb to go by that, although obvious to me now, I still break ocassionally... If you can so easily diss something about your own song, don't post it untill you're 100% satisfied. Of course if you don't know your away around [whatever program you're using] it can be hard to ever be satisfied, so don't sweat it if thats the case.
Well you asked for reviews... take it easy and keep up the good work. I'm gonna check out the rest now. -Chutzpah (3/5)
sounds like dnb
this was a really good piece. the only thing i didnt like was that "uh" sound that played constantly. it just got annoying after a while
keep producing this good shit man