lmao
At this very point we have the same amount of reviews.
So how about me reviewing you this time?
I liked this, it`s a really happy tune, but it`s not especially... outstanding, though.
Upbeat, it was, but how about you sitting back and r-e-l-a-x
a little? Since this is really stressing and hurt any form of musical sense after a while.
As usual you used some kind of trancelead, but that`s not very original, so you won`t get especially much on that either, sorry.
the very electronic background instrument could be a nice addition, that would be the was you played it`s desire. It went out pretty well, but still insanely stressing.
I suggest you to use a more intelligent melody for it, or eventually just remove it, I think the last suggestion would be the best either way.
Drums.
These were the main part of the song! I think it cheered it up quite a lot. Still they also are a part of the stress in the song. If you had them a bit slower and added some other kind of drum as an alternate drum track, it would be much better.
Then it`s time for the bass. I really can hear it here, and it`s kinda wet for an instrument.
I liked this! You had a great melody, but it`S just going on as a very short loop of 3 seconds all the time, not diversed, not anything like that. Could need an improvement.
For the main instrument, you had a very good idea for a melody, which went quite happy, but as said, not very enjoyable. If you had it even higher and thouht out semi-melodies and such with the same instrument, then I would like more.
Also, could you please make another melody for it? Since this was more like some Weebl and Bob- like thing, which I like, but when it`s used in any other case, it turns out like some rushed crap.
Now that I`ve laid the synths behind, how about looking at the overall feel and how it was put together.
These tracks are all quite happy, and so are they melodies, they are damn stressing.
If you slowed it down, it would turn either a lot more enjoyable or really weird. Either way it would have been better!
Since in the lenght it`s really annoying to listen to this loop, I usually listen to it again while reviewing it, to be sure I remember it all.
In this case this could be some of the most annoying experience I`ve ever gotten.
Like if I was caught in a tivoli with way too stressed clowns and such trying too hard making it good and failing.
You seem to have tried too hard.
This didn`t really fit any marine theme, so I wonder why you called it that? You should call it Tivoli Theme or something like that, since that is the first thing I imagine.
And then for the final line,
Nice track, very stressing, I liked it but not in the lenght.
Q
Stealth-Emergence 
