I like the general feel of it. The strings have some decent chords, but they lack in character. They feel a little out of place with the rest of the track. The beat kinda sits in the background at certain parts. 2:48 was my favorite part in this. The low end bass mixed with the choir seemed to work rather well. The progression of the song is good, but it gets a little repetitive after awhile. 1:58 was the best part of the percussion. It went an interesting route and then just went back to the regular beat again. I think the song is overall a nice track. I just think you could do better. There's always room for improvement after all. I hear a lot of potential in you. I listened to your first track and liked it a lot better than this one. Mixing is an issue though. You want the beats to stand out, but don't make them too in your face. I'll keep an eye on you for new uploads. :)
On a side note, the song makes me think of standing under a tunnel during a hailstorm or something along that line and having to wait it out. I don't know why exactly. I just got that feeling from it.