Meh, it's not absolutely horrible, but as I pianist, I can't say it's exactly my cup if tea. (That IS an expression, right? Or am I just making that up...O_o...)
Some of the notes were kind of dissonant. Some of the accidentals, or even just out of place notes within the scale, sounded out of wack. The song itself was a little boring and I don't think the harp really fit in some places. I actually did like some of what the harp did though. It was kind of nice and cheerful. :)
Try incorperating something more interesting to keep it from being too repetitive. Maybe do an arpeggiated left hand or something, try to through in some sevenths...I don't know, but do try to make sure the notes don't clash too much.
Sorry if I sound a little harsh, but I'm a pianist, and I'm not too into this one. I can see where you are going with this one though, and I think with some reworking it wouldn't be bad at all. :)
Thank you so much for your review. and you're right, the song is boring. when i begin a song i have no idea whats coming into my head; i just write! but this was just some melody i thought i wanted to get out. Thanks again!
Not bad some of the notes were a bit alkward and sounded out of tune/played on the wrong key. idk just my opinion. Not too original. If you are going to upload a solo piano recording Make it more interesting