i like it its pretty good only thing is the reverb effects on the percussion and bass kick makes me dizzy lol. and it lacks the right amount of melody so you should add some more intruments that could possibly harmonize what you have now. when making a techno song you should not make everything so blocky so make the new melody electronic yet still smooth and stringish without it being so chopped off. i like the classical version better but i think this song has potential to be better.
did you use your mac or a PC with FL6? if you used a PC and you trust me email me the FL6 file and i'll add an instrument and show you what I mean. I will under no circumstance upload it and claim it as my song i will simply email it back to you and you can do waht ever you want with it :D.
send me a messege requesting my email if you would n't mind leting me mess around with this song cuz i would love to :D
PS this is probably the longest review ever lol