Ok first i want to say i really like the beginning it reminded me of a video game i played a while ago, also i get a strange feeling when i hear it because it sounds industrial but it also has some trance chords, the breakdown i really liked it, i liked the chord progression in the breakdown but i feel like i wanted to hear more of it, i like the vocals i think they go great with this style of sound, the only thing i have a problem with its the mix.
I think the vocals should be a little more present and the crash cymbal really really bugged me it sounds too much for my taste, other than that great sound.
Keep up the good work and cheers from Mexico
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