Great tune, but I think the melody went a little weird (0:28). I feel like it is better if it comes back to the original melody more often, that went pretty good up until 0:20 -ish. It would be cool if you made this in a full length song with some more flair, like a build-up, and a sick drop ;)
You may don't know but I really can't do intros, outros and drops. Sorry I have to learn a lot!
But thanks for the comment!
(I know the melody went quite weird but after that it gives a good feeling to get back to normal.)