This isn't really a Demo. This is more or less just you asking for jobs. In order to get jobs you should create a demo reel, this consists of different voices/ emotions you can do, all mashed up into one recording. They are usually no longer than 1 minute and 30 seconds with about 10 different Voices in it. Good Luck :) Can't wait to hear what you come up with!
ahah thank you,,, this was on a particularly off day and i kinda just pulled this out of my ass. i'll get a proper demo out there soon