Well here is something good the voices showed some real nice work, you showed the emotion and you made it feel real, scared excited eager emotions really come out and overall was kinda nice, so nice job here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well since its a voice project its good wouldnt mind a small ambiant sound in the backround but not really needed.
the story the background music oh my god it's awesome :')
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