Really cool and electronic, could use a little more speeding up
Hmm.....it feels like there are some things out of place here. The melody feels too random and is hard to follow. At times it gets too high pitched and squealy. This needs more structure and there should be elements that blend together more. I hope this helps.
I fixed the squealy melody, added some countermelodies and stuff, and generally improved the piece. I don't really see what needs fixing in the structure other than blending though. Hope it sounds better now.
Very Very Good! I really like most of the song, but the middle seems kinda slow.
Keep up the good work.
Thanks for the advice! By slow do you mean speed-slow or melodic variation-slow? Whichever the case, I'll keep working.