I actually don't have any real complaints with this one. It's well done and camlm. I like it. Short and sweet. Feels like it'd work in a game somewhere.
I might have already asked this, but what are you using on your iPad to write music? I might have a couple suggestions on other audio DAWs for you to check out.
I'm glad you liked it! :D
I use Music Studio for iPad (also for iPhone, but I don't compose there) to make my songs.
Kewl, btw this is Ghostdasher from GD
Cool. This is QJrocks from GD, but you probably knew that already :P