Hey, you actually got me to sing along to this :)
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Rough version of a tribute song me and my music producer friend Geoff McNeely are doing for Newgrounds which will be made into an animated music video soon.
I hope it will inspire everyone to support Newgrounds https://www.newgrounds.com/supporter :)
Original tune is from a video I made back in 2011 ago called Internet Fame you can check it out here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Os6g4bxmPtY
Lyrics:
I made a flash
Made some people laugh
And it's so funny
I'm still hungry
A couple of views
On Facebook and YouTube
I'm doing fine
Atleast I'm online
It's just a game
Until it's mainstream
This internet fame
Working 9 to 5
Can't let my talent die
So I go online
Just to upload whoa oh oh oh
All that I hold on
Entertainment is hard
You make it big or you starve
But I've found Newgrounds
And it's ok hey hey hey
I'm having my say hey
With everything by everyone
With everything by everyone
With everything by everyone...
jackbliss responds:
That's the best thing a songwriter can hear. Thanks so much! :)
A piece with potential, a few things to improve. My main problem with it, is the loud mastering. It's very compressed and loud, hurts my ears when playing at a moderate volume. Second, the delivery of lyrics occasionally have an odd stretch time wise or in terms of note(especially "made some people lahh-aff"). On a positive note, this is a dedicated and lovely tribute to the site with interesting instrumentation.
An interesting listen throughout. I loved the phrasing of the vocals in the first half. It gives a poppy feel while a really clever idea or phrase here or there. When it comes to the 8 bit sound I'm not sure how I feel about it being a straight tone throughout without any taper on the note.
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