Not a bad start but some of the lead notes in the beginning and so on feels a bit off, like it doesn't flow well. I like the percussion though and the instruments. Later on that synth that comes in at 0:30 i like that but it's too loud and distracts from the rest of the instruments. I feel the structure is a good start but could use a melody change in the lead notes to flow with the rest.
There's some clipping around 1:18 from it being too loud probably. I feel the transition to it turning into house wasn't bad but could be better. The House part of it, same thing with the melody I mentioned earlier. It's also a bit repetitive. At 2:17....compression needs to be fixed here. Or just turn that bass down...it's causing the other instruments to duck down behind it. It's overpowering them.
Overall not bad, but with a couple mixing tweaks and melody tweaking, this could be a more solid song.
I see what you mean, thanks for the review and check out my other songs :)
Cool! :) You grow up as a musician! :)
I actually do plan to make this a living later when I'm older, I'm very glad for your support!!