It's cool for a first song but there are just way too much drums, or whatever that's called.
It's not too bad for a first track, it needs a little work. The bass and drums could be tweaked to be a bit more dominant and the lead gets annoying, try breaking it a little so it's no so repetive even a small break would help that. Not the worst debut track ever though, good work, keep it up.
I'm not a fan of the mix. The lead is killing my ear drums. The drums aren't powerful enough. I will say it's more interesting than most of the noob stuff posted here. It could just be you need better headphones. I'll give you 3 stars for it being interesting.
thanks for the feedback!
a bit repetitive for how short it is, but i do have to give props on the part where it gets really fast about 30 seconds in as it certainly got interesting there. ive heard worse, so good job on your "first" known piece of work.