Really nice vocals. But I think your breathing is too noticeable. I don't know how to get around that either though.
Guitar work is nice too, but it seems like you could be a lot more confident and that that would make it better.
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Cover of Pink Floyd's Learning to Fly.
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Really nice vocals. But I think your breathing is too noticeable. I don't know how to get around that either though.
Guitar work is nice too, but it seems like you could be a lot more confident and that that would make it better.
Thanks for the review, and that's very fair. I hope you check out my later covers as I've improved the audio quality and singing!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
* Cover / remake of a third-party piece.
Excercise caution when using it, refer to author comments / contact the author for details.