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Jan 10, 2016 | 2:02 PM EST
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3.9 MB
3 min 1 sec
3.85 / 5.00

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Rated 3.85 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

Still bad with selecting genres...

Also yes I'm not dead, this just took a really long time to complete.

I used so many delay effects on this song, so I'm a bit worried about some instruments being a bit loud. I tried to keep it so it wouldn't be gratingly loud, but I don't know how well it turned out. I apologize if something like that happens.

Please leave any and all criticism!



Rated 5 / 5 stars

I really like this! It has a very...epic feel to it :3 ~S~

QJrocks responds:

Thanks! I'm glad that you enjoyed it.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

The beginning is bad (try to begin with 0:24)
Bad render
May be a good song, like EvilGrapez said, but needs compression
Good luck for your future songs

QJrocks responds:

Yeah, I went way overboard with the delay effects and it absolutely destroyed the quality of the song.

Anyway, thanks for the feedback!


Rated 3 / 5 stars

It doesn't really feel loud enough. It could use some mastering.

The delay effects were used a bit too much, and some of the instruments could have been more well chosen. For me, it actually felt like the song was varying between happy and dramatic, especially around the end. I don't know why, it just felt that way.

The ending felt incomplete for some reason. Also, it didn't sound like it was very high quality. Is this 192kbs? The "rriiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnngggg" sound at 00:45 could have done without the reverb/delay effect (I can't really tell if it's either), and lastly, the mixing is pretty odd (some of the instruments are way too loud and need compression).

It's got potential to be a good track, but these flaws are what ruined it for me. I'm sorry if it sounds like I'm bashing on your work - I understand you must have spent a lot of time on this and you must have worked very hard on it. I just want to provide some criticism for you to use, that's all. You do this all the time with my tracks. :P

- Evilgrapez

QJrocks responds:

You do raise some valid points.

Something that really worried me was when I previewed this on my computer, it had quite a few differences from an iPad with headphones, so that may be the cause of some problems.

Really? You thought is was too quiet? And here I thought that it was too blaringly loud...

Yeah, sometimes I felt I didn't know what direction I was taking the song in, either, but by that tine I had already put too much work into it to scrap it.

Yep, it is 192kb/s, but I don't understand why you say that this one sounds low quality while many of my other tracks use 192 or even 128 kb/s. There is an option for 328 kb/s (or somewhere around that), should I be using that?

I agree, some instruments were a bit loud, especially the xylophone around 1:50. I tried reducing tge volume a bit, but I didn't want it to get so quiet that it couldn't be heard.

Don't worry, this wasn't anywhere near bashing. You raised valid points and gave what you thought was a fair score. Neither one of us would get anywhere if we had review sections full of Yes Men :P