hum.. please, don't worry, i'm not telling you that's bad. Your music is good. I don't have a good english, so i will try to do a good review.
First, I think you chooses the bad categories. It seem like to be an techno music.
Second, the base rush to much. My smiquer don't like that. the sound is bad in other words. Probably, semoene else will tell you a better review.