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Castle Raziel

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A quick idea that popped in my head last year... I wasn't going to share this until it was finished, but I haven't finished it yet so... here it is.

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Another great track! Please bring in the singer for the "ready or not" cover for the lyrics provided by the other Xenogenocide fan before this post! PLEASE!

Lyrics I made up for this track

Lyrics

I wake up in a yellow sky
Golden, pleasing to the eye
The sparrow flutters gracefully
To a picturesque blue sea
The tortoise breaks out of its shell
Having a story to tell
All my fears have now been quelled
Thanks to Castle Raziel

I keep on climbing (closer to my dream)
And everywhere I turn, I'm closer to a scene
Of beauteous desires
Stars no longer hide their fires

I've reached nirvana, enlightenment is mine
Higher up the mountain I climb
As horizon passes time

Looming a white eggshell moon
Like the warmth of a mother's womb
That's the tale I have to tell

Down at Castle Raziel

Shit, man... sounds done to me.
Needs vocals. I'm gonna get on that.
\m/

THERE'S THE EAR-TINGLING MASTER!

Bout damn time we hear something new out of you...How long has it been since your last post?
(Taps Fingers on Desk...repeatedly, annoyingly)

The lead could use some fine-tuning as i'm picking up on some echo (or was that intentional?) , and the drums are a smidge over-powering. symbols/hi-hats are a little on the low side and could use a minor volume boost in various places, namely at 2:00 - 2:18, would really make them shine bright!

The melody feels like it derives from some old BFMV and KSE...with a splash of FFDP...or is that just me?

I eagerly await your finished piece

I love you.

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Uploaded
Jan 6, 2016
3:39 PM EST
Genre
Heavy Metal
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9.5 MB
4 min 10 sec
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