Here we have a decent tune, somethings could be better though and i will ofcourse get to that later, but I guess that all comes ahnd and hand, so nice job on what you do have, I wouldnt mind checkoing out more stuff soon, but anyways good track sofar. I will say this was kind of different I do like all the unique and strange "SOUNDS" that make this what it is, there was some small "STATIC" but maybe that was the idea all along this tune is actually going in as one of my faves it just draws you in nice work overall. And to end this off, it was a pleasure listening this it was differant yet still pretty good, not what I would normally listen too but still something decent here. so keep up what you are doing, because you have something great going, and would love to hear more.
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This was different but I like it, maybe remove the static seems like if it didnt fit but everything else was great.