I have to agree with Axel.
The tone didn't really flow with the vocals much in my opinion my friend...but the way you carried the vocals has an A7X feel to it with the way the beat carries your voice.
Love Burns DID carry your best performance in my opinion also, but then again...I've been digging your music since being a part of the newgrounds community.
The shy artist thing...please.
Lock yourself up in the garage and soundproof that bitch...cut loose and let us hear the end results!
Other than all of that, a good ear tingling piece this was.
"More, you must, for us, make you."
(stares blankly into space)
I absolutely agree, the tone of my voice is NOT matching with the tone of the song. AT ALL. But I appreciate your words of encouragement and I'll take them to heart next time around.
And a soundproof garage might just be what I need to keep working on vocal stuff because the paper-thin walls of my apartment aren't doing me any justice.
C'mon dude, this wasn't shitty at all, in fact it was pretty solid. I will say that I agree with the one friend who said it wasn't quite "you," more so with the vocals. That's not to say they were bad, because you have a great voice. I think it might've been the overall tone that felt different. I feel that 'Love Burns' had your strongest vocal performance (I know it had autotune but that's besides the point). The feel was more intense and focused. It could've been like your other friend said, how the vocals were blended into the background a little too much, and that's why they felt softer here. I dunno, either way it was a good song, so well done sir :3
(Also, I totally get the shy-artist-around-other-people thing, cause I've got it too haha)
Well thanks for the compliments man. For this recording I was trying to make a more, uhm... mature sound? I feel like doing more vocal things as of late, but if I do they will definitely be more along the lines of "Love Burns", definitely more focused and portraying the emotions I'm trying to. This was most definitely a test for those songs.
Either way it's good to hear you thought this random dropping was worth it! Thanks!!
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