it was ok

This is good, for your third song. Try to make your songs more diverse, the repetiveness of the melody gets boring after a while. I like how you added more sounds in the gradually, but it still doesnt diversify the song. Also, the panning of the synths you put in was annoying, hopping from speaker to speaker.

And you can't just make the melody start and stop so abruptly, like you did near the middle of the song, when everything just stops and the drums come in. I mean, it was a cool effects and all, but you gotta have some better transitions, like fade-ins/fade-outs or starting the drums before the melody stops so its like continuing.

Well, to sum it up, you used good sounds, but that doesnt mean it will add up to a good song. The only part of the melody thats actually musical is the synths, that are mostly covered up by the other things. I'll give it a 6/10, a download, and a 5/5 to show my support.

Review me back, I would really appreciate some feedback on one or two of my songs.

-ChiRoN