Where's the drop?
You're melodies are good but work on your composition and mixing. Not something I would listen to but its good melody work.
Have 5 stars because ratings are stupid.
hmm...well it's not really drum and bass. There is no apparent no catchy, fast DnB groove (nor really any DnB appropriate samples) and the bassline is limited to a repetitive piano line. The banging kick drum is more fitting in with trance or some 4 to the floor genre. Some interesting synth ideas. The chord progression and melodies are on the generic side, but there are some decent ideas that can spring forward from all this. The dynamics could be tailored a bit more well (every sound seems like it was ran through a maximizer) and the song is a bit over-drenched in reverb. The tempo changes were a nice touch, the automations were on the predictable side but gives the track a level of diversity...I like how you ended the song on a half cadence.