It's great! Good, actually... I just think it needs more ambiance in the background or some heavy basslines but idk (that's just me). I'm no expert at music but some transitions came in so sudden; I think it's acceptable enough.
Everything's okay, for me... Keep it up!
Thank you very much, I appreciate the feedback. I've also realized that after listening to it after a while again. I am actually working on this problems (thats also the reason why I haven't posted anything new yet) because I really want the next songs to be great, though I may post a WIP of my current song just to get some objective feedback and know what to improve on it.