I agree with 5lip5tr3am3r
You have 2 tracks here that simply don't match up properly. Separate the 2 and build each individually. Nothing but love for you though. Not bad at all.
There are some good moments in this track, but it feels like there are two tracks here combined and they are fighting each other, if you know what I mean - there is a positive sound which could be used as a loop, and the rest of the tune which is far more agressive sounding. I hope this make sense. It's like you have too good songs, but they are stuck together and competing with each other. A bit of surgery required IMO.
Invaderzim needs to blow it out his ass, this is awesome. ^_^
~ <3 Ikari
im going to shoot my self
my ears r bleeding aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa if i hear this again im going to be the 1 that cant hear
very good and creative i love it
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.