Gonna dive more interesting:
While I like the tune in the song (the drop), I find it to be very repetitive, and the voices at the beginning and end are kind of misunderstanding and ear-piercing, not to try and be rude or hate the song, I still think it’s good, and the voices still must have token some time to do, and yes I know it’s tooken but it thinks I’m saying "token" for some reason. Anyways, this is a decent song, but it could use some work on a V.I.P. but yah. Noice.

Sounds much like you made this on GarageBand. The song is not too exciting in general and the voice is not describable...

TeM ouTa TEm!!!