I'm no Dr. in Musicolgy, but...
Why do you ask? Personally I say if you ask the answers no. If you do continue this i recommend going to this site and DLing all the drum samples http://hem.passagen.se/lej97/kalava/
The reason is because those drum samples are fuckin weak. Probably FL presets (hell the drum beats weak too but thats another story). You need bass and possibly some more harmony. Moreso bass but you could us a little both. Change it up to, let it flow into something new.
I don't know why I bothered reviewing this... and I don't know why you would post this, its kinda a waste of everyones time but you wanted help and thats all I can do.
Please do us all a favor and post your FINAL versions of songs... and make sure they don't suck.
well thank you for this and i am used to get mostly negative things because how i still do or so with the songs they are never good enough so thats why they get 2 or less