Honestly, I am not a fan of 'Dance' music, but I think this was nicely done. You can improve on the transition to the piano because it seems kind of abrupt in my opinion. The ending melody kind of drags out a little long as well. At least you know how to implement vocals unlike me xD! This, I think is a success and I hope to hear more from you!!!
Thank you so much for the constructive criticism! It really makes my day when people see potential in me and they help me bring out that potential. This song was written at the beginning of 2015. I just got permission from Macy to upload it to Newgrouns/Soundcloud et cetera. I was thinking of remaking the song almost completely. I feel that the melody after the piano held the song back and took away from the overall "goodness" of the rest of it. Since the original composition of this song, I've learned many ways to add subtle effects that add so much to the grand scheme of things. Again, thank you so much for enjoying the song, commenting on what you think could be improved, and helping me bring out my full potential!