This is much better than your first song! Wow, the melody is very beautiful and the rhythm is very well mastered! The only thing that dosent quite work is the noises in the drop, I know that dubstep has these wubs, but the wubs arent the main part of the drop (except for some particular songs). Dont fit every space with wubs, that wont sound good, just fill where you need. Also the song needs more mastering but mastering often comes with experience.
PS: How old are you? I am 14
I'm 13 :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.