You have better songs , but I kinda like to beats as a background, needs more melody
Ok, let's be honest, you have to improve your EQ and mastering, there are parts of your song that need to be polished, especially around 1:00. On the bright side, I must say that I enjoyed the melody and your synth selection. Just work on these issues and your songs will be greater :D
-Hope it helped.
Thanks for the advice! I'll definately work on that!