At 1:00 i was in love with the song. I am a sucker for good lead synths and pads. You executed the melodies and pitch bending perfectly then. I like the structure of this song a lot. The rhythm is actually really good-- I just think it should be a lot stronger and louder. The loudness and strength of the drum patterns really make or break the song. Since you couldnt do much mastering though, I can see where it went wrong. I recommend coming back to this song once you are able to master it-- this could be a really nice song.
Thanks a ton :) I really appreciate you going out of your way to give me feedback. Just as with Sunlight, my computer is quite bad, so I might have to get a new computer first if I'm ever going back to this at all.
I had a lot of fun with the melody and the synths (considering I was using serum because serum is very fun) and I'm also getting the hang of basses too, which is a big step for me considering that was the main reason I got it.
But anyway, thanks so much for the feedback. It means a lot. :)
is a good song, but need some more rithym...
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