make longer and its all cursing like so like not good
you guys are crazy mad good dawgz!
Dude u sound really OFF...beat is hot but you suck lol..
Mumblin' it up
Well your voice is good, but you mumble too much. On top of that, your rhymes aren't good, at all. I mean, I could've rhymed Niggas with niggas and then followed it up with a "Niggas niggas" too, but people would just lose interest. Keep going, you're going to be awesome some day.
look at the white boy tryin so hard, and failing even harder :D
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