I like the high pitched pluck around 0:45. The chords at 1:01 are just a little too loud. Bass slide at 3:02 was cool, but you repeated it too many times, I think. The end gets a bit repetitive. For such an intense track, I think you could have used a better ending. Good work, though! It was catchy and really creative!
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