I really liked the intro, catchy and fast :) (but not too much)
the song have good ambiance, but it's a little too... a little too progressive ?
I don't like the voice (mainly because of the laughter, i'm sorry if you have mentally unstable, I feel that it drowns most of its ...) But they have some notable exceptions , such as voice , which is well placed 0:55.
but this have potential! keep the good work.